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Mock 1 — Reading and Use of English

The whole paper, in the shape and the order of the real one, with the support already open on every part. Do each part with the help showing, press Check, then clear the support and do the part once more on your own. The texts are not easier than the exam’s; only the help arrives earlier. The unaided second attempt is the one the page reports.

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Reading & UoE · Mock 1 Scaffolded 0 of 0 parts done

This is the scaffolded mock: every part opens with its support showing. Use it, check, then clear it and try the part alone — that second attempt is the one to watch.

Part 1 · Questions 1–8

Multiple-choice cloze

For each question, decide which answer (A, B, C or D) best fits the gap. Every option is a real word and every option makes sense on its own. What decides it is the company the word keeps — the fixed phrase, the collocation, the preposition that follows.

A brave choice

The British compliment repays close study, because a great deal of it is not a compliment at all. Consider the word brave. A colleague who calls your new haircut brave, or your decision to serve fish at Christmas brave, is not praising your courage. They are damning you with 1 ______ praise — informing you, with impeccable manners, that a mistake has been made and that they were not consulted.

Interesting does similar work. So does ambitious, which in a planning meeting means that the thing will never be built. These are not lies; they are 2 ______ compliments, and the British ear is tuned to them from childhood. A speaker who is at 3 ______ to say how much she enjoyed your talk has enjoyed it. A speaker who says it was interesting is asking you, kindly, never to give it again.

To an outsider all of this can look like the 4 ______ of insincerity. It is closer to the opposite. The compliment that is not quite a compliment gives the listener the 5 ______ of the doubt: it leaves them room to hear the praise, if praise is what they need to hear, and to hear the warning later, in private, when it will do less damage. The manoeuvre is not lost 6 ______ the people it is performed on. To all 7 ______ and purposes, both parties know exactly what has been said; what neither of them has done is say it.

The trick is to know the register. From a stranger, not bad is polite. From a Yorkshireman who has known you for thirty years, it is 8 ______ praise — and you may have to wait another thirty for the next.

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Part 2 · Questions 9–16

Open cloze

Write one word in each gap. At C2 the answers are still grammar words — linkers, auxiliaries, determiners, particles — but the structures they complete are the hard ones: inversion after a negative, so … as to, fossilised subjunctives, concessive however.

Moving on

No sooner had the email gone round 9 ______ the translation began. Nobody in the building had been sacked. Three people, it said, would be moving on, a fourth had decided to explore other opportunities, and the department as a whole was to be right-sized — a verb so carefully chosen 10 ______ to mean nothing at all to anyone who had not already heard the news.

11 ______ that anybody was deceived. The purpose of language like this is not to hide what has happened but to make it possible to be in a room with the people it has happened to. 12 ______ it not for the euphemism, the manager would have to say the plain word to somebody’s face, and the plain word — sacked, dismissed, let go, whatever the generation prefers — is one the British will go to remarkable lengths never to pronounce, let 13 ______ hear pronounced about themselves.

The cost is paid later. A phrase that has been used to soften bad news cannot afterwards be used for anything else, which is why the company’s next genuine reorganisation will need a new word, and the one after that another. On 14 ______ account will right-sized survive more than a year or two; it is already, to anyone under thirty, a joke. 15 ______ that as it may, the machine goes on producing them, and the striking thing is how quickly each replacement acquires the taint of the word it replaced. The euphemism does not remove the meaning. It only borrows the meaning for a while — and the loan, 16 ______ generous the terms, always falls due.

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Part 3 · Questions 17–24

Word formation

Use the word given in capitals at the end of each line to form a word that fits the gap. At C2 the change is rarely a single suffix: expect a prefix as well, a change of word class, or both. Read the whole sentence — the negative is often hidden in the meaning, not in the grammar.

The oath

Every reader admitted to the Bodleian Library in Oxford must first make a declaration, and in substance it has gone 17 ______ for four centuries: not to remove any book, not to mark or deface one, and not to bring into the library, or kindle there, any fire or flame. New readers tend to smile at the last clause. The librarians, who have watched the building survive four hundred winters without central heating, read it with a 18 ______ that is not entirely put on.

The library does not lend. It did not lend to Charles I, whose request in 1645 met with a polite 19 ______ , and it does not lend now, which means that a scholar who needs a book must go to the book. To anyone raised on the modern assumption that knowledge should be delivered, this looks like 20 ______ for its own sake. Regular readers come to see it 21 ______ : a book that cannot leave is a book that is always there.

The oath does something else, too, which its authors can hardly have intended. Sworn aloud, in a room built for the purpose, it makes the first visit a ceremony — and a reader who has promised, in so many words, not to set fire to the collection is 22 ______ to treat it casually afterwards. Other libraries have tried to reproduce the effect with signage, and have found it 23 ______ . The words are the same. What is missing is the 24 ______ of having said them.

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Part 4 · Questions 25–30

Key-word transformations

Complete the second sentence so that it means the same as the first, using the word given. Do not change that word. Write between three and eight words, including the word given. In the real paper each of these is worth two marks — one for each half of the structure — so a half-right answer still scores.

How to read these

Every item hides one structure. Find the structure first — an inversion, a compact conditional, a subjunctive-style past, a fixed phrase, a verb pattern — and the words follow. Contractions count as two words.

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The meeting had only just begun when the fire alarm went off.
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______________________________ when the fire alarm went off.

three to eight words, including HARDLY

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If the porter had not intervened, the manuscript would have been lost.
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We should have replaced that word years ago.
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It ______________________________ replaced.

three to eight words, including TIME

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You must not, under any circumstances, tell her what he really said.
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On ______________________________ what he really said.

three to eight words, including ACCOUNT

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The committee did everything possible to avoid using the word.
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The committee ______________________________ using the word.

three to eight words, including LENGTHS

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The speaker refused to admit that he had borrowed the line.
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The speaker ______________________________ the line.

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Part 5 · Questions 31–36

Multiple choice on a long text

Read the text and choose the answer (A, B, C or D) which you think fits best. Almost every wrong option here is true of the text somewhere — it is placed under the wrong question, or it says slightly more than the writer said.

Across and down

I have set cryptic crosswords for a national newspaper for twenty-six years, under a name that is not mine, and in all that time I have met perhaps forty of the people who solve them. It is a strange intimacy. Every morning several hundred thousand strangers sit down with something I made and try, for twenty minutes or an hour, to think exactly as I thought. When they succeed they feel clever. When they fail they feel, in a small way, that I have cheated them. Neither feeling is about me. Both are about the contract.

The contract is the thing outsiders never understand about the cryptic, and the reason they find it so forbidding. A cryptic clue is not a riddle. A riddle may mislead you however it likes; a clue may mislead you only in ways that are, on inspection, perfectly fair. Every word in it must earn its place, either as definition or as instruction, and the solver who has been led up the garden path must be able to walk back down it afterwards and see the exact point at which they took the wrong turning. A clue that cannot be reverse-engineered is not difficult. It is broken, and the letters will say so by lunchtime.

What the setter is actually selling, then, is not difficulty but a particular sensation, which the trade calls the penny drop. It is the half-second in which a sentence that has been read eleven times as English is suddenly read as something else — in which flower stops meaning a plant and starts meaning a river, and the solver sees that it always did. I have come to think this is the whole reason the form exists. The answer is never interesting. The moment of seeing the answer is, and a clue is a machine for manufacturing that moment on demand.

It is often said that the cryptic is peculiarly British, and I used to resist the claim as parochial. I no longer do, though not for the reasons usually given. The usual explanation is that the British love wordplay, which is true and explains nothing, since so do the French. The better explanation, I think, is that the form depends on a reader who is comfortable being deceived by someone they trust — who takes it as a compliment, rather than an insult, to be told a lie that is also, read another way, the truth. That is a national habit before it is a hobby. A culture that says not bad when it means superb has been solving cryptic clues at the breakfast table for a very long time.

My own rule, arrived at slowly, is that the solver must be given everything and told nothing. Every clue I write is read aloud to somebody who does not solve, and if that person laughs at the surface — the innocent sentence the clue pretends to be — I keep it, whether or not the wordplay underneath is elegant. A clue with a dull surface and brilliant mechanics is a clue only other setters admire. The solver will forgive a mechanism that creaks; what they will not forgive is being bored on the way in.

I retire next year, and I have been asked what I will miss. Not the puzzles, I think, which will go on without me and may improve. What I will miss is the post — the letters, now emails, from people I will never meet, who write to say that a clue held them up for forty minutes on a train and that the moment it gave way they laughed out loud and alarmed a stranger. Nobody writes to say a clue was easy. Nobody writes to say a clue was hard. They write about the half-second, and I have spent twenty-six years learning that it is the only thing I was ever paid for.

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In the third paragraph, the writer uses the example of the word “flower” to illustrate
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Why did the writer come to accept that the cryptic crossword is peculiarly British?
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What does the writer say about the “surface” of a clue in the fifth paragraph?
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What does the final paragraph reveal about what the writer values most in his work?
Part 6 · Questions 37–43

Gapped text — paragraphs

Seven paragraphs have been removed from the article. Choose from paragraphs A–H the one which fits each gap. There is one extra paragraph you will not need. Match the links, not the topic: every paragraph in this part is about misquotation, so topic will not separate them.

The line nobody said

Miriam Pell keeps a card index in a spare bedroom in Reading, and it contains nothing that anybody said. Four thousand cards, each carrying a famous line, the name it is attached to, and — in red — the words that were actually spoken or written, if any were. She has been adding to it for thirty-one years, first as a reference librarian and now, in retirement, as something closer to a collector.

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The improvement is nearly always of the same kind. The real sentence is a little too long, or a little too flat, or has its stress in the wrong place, and the version that survives has been quietly repaired.

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What interests her is not the error but its direction. A misremembered line could in principle drift anywhere; in practice it drifts towards the memorable, as though the language itself had a preference and were enforcing it one mouth at a time.

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None of this would matter much if the improved versions stayed in cinemas and anthologies. They do not. They turn up in wedding speeches and leading articles, in the mouths of ministers and on the walls of gyms, and Pell has spent a good part of her retirement being asked, by people who are about to use one, whether it is genuine.

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She has some sympathy with them. The version they want to use is, by any test except the historical one, the better sentence, and she is not sure that history is entitled to the last word.

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Which raises the question of what, exactly, she thinks she is correcting. If the line is better, and the language wants it, and nobody is deceived about anything that matters, the red ink can look like pedantry.

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Her one concession to the modern world is a website, maintained by a nephew, on which about a tenth of the index can be searched. It receives, she says, two kinds of visitor: people checking a line before they use it, and people who have just used one and would rather not be told.

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She showed me the card as I was leaving. It is filed under her own name, and it is the only one in the index written entirely in red.

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Part 7 · Questions 44–53

Multiple matching

You are going to read four contributions to a series about writing that is meant to be heard rather than read. For questions 44–53, choose from the writers A–D. The writers may be chosen more than once. Work from the questions to the texts, not the other way round.

Written to be heard — four contributions

A · Gareth, political speechwriter
I write for a mouth I do not own, which is the first thing to understand about the trade and the last thing anyone outside it believes. The minister’s voice is in my head all day — its lengths, the consonants it swallows, the words it cannot say without sounding like someone else — and a sentence that reads beautifully and cannot be said in that voice is a sentence I have wasted. Rhythm is the whole job. People imagine I spend my time on arguments; I spend it on breath. A line the audience will remember has to arrive at the end of a breath, not in the middle, so that the pause after it is physiological rather than theatrical. The rule of three is not a rhetorical trick, whatever the textbooks say. It is the smallest number that makes a pattern, and the audience hears the pattern before they hear the words, which is why the third item can be almost anything. I have watched a hall applaud a list whose third item they had not understood. They were applauding the shape. What I have never managed, in nineteen years, is to write the line that gets quoted next morning. Those are always the speaker’s own — an ad lib, a slip, a joke at my draft’s expense. I have made my peace with it. The quoted line is the one the room already believed.

B · Leah, performance poet
The page is where my poems go to be filed; they live in the room. I know how that sounds, and I have stopped apologising for it. A poem that works out loud and fails on paper has failed at nothing I care about, and the reverse — the poem that is exquisite on the page and dies in the mouth — is the commonest thing in the country, because most poets write for the eye and read aloud as an afterthought. I write the other way round. Every line is tested against an actual breath, and if I cannot get to the end of it without gasping, the line is wrong, not my lungs. What surprises people is how much of the work is silence. A pause on the page is a line break — the reader supplies it, at whatever length they choose. A pause in the room is mine: I decide how long a hundred people wait, and I have learned that they will wait far longer than I expected, provided they can see that I am not waiting too. I am often asked whether this is really poetry or a kind of theatre. I find the question dull. The oldest poems we have were made for the ear and remembered by it, and writing them down was the innovation, not saying them.

C · Orla, advertising copywriter
Six words. Occasionally seven, and I fight for every one of them. A slogan is the most compressed form of writing there is — more than a haiku, because a haiku does not have to sell anything — and what people never see is the two hundred lines that were thrown away to get to it. The test is not whether it reads well. Nothing I write is read; it is heard, half-attended to, on a bus, over a conversation. So it has to survive being misheard. A slogan that depends on a pun works only for the people who catch the pun, and half of them will resent being made to. What I want is a line that sounds inevitable, so that the listener has the sensation of having thought of it themselves. Rhythm does most of that: a stressed syllable at the end, a pattern that closes. The cleverest line I ever wrote was cut in favour of a duller one that scanned, and the duller one was right. I mind the moral side of it more than I used to. A phrase engineered to bypass thought is a phrase engineered to bypass thought, and it does not become innocent because the product is toothpaste. I am good at it. I am not sure that is entirely a compliment.

D · Simon, parish priest
Most of what I say in a week was written four hundred years ago by somebody with a better ear than mine, and I have come to see that as the point rather than the problem. A congregation does not want my sentences. It wants sentences it has said before, at a funeral or a wedding or the last time it was frightened, and the rhythm of those sentences is what carries people who have stopped believing the words. I have buried atheists who asked for the old service, and I understood them completely. My own writing is the sermon, and the sermon is where I learned humility. The first ones I wrote were essays, and they were read to a church that could not turn back a page. Now I write for the ear: short sentences, one idea, and the important thing said twice in two different ways, because a listener who missed it the first time cannot ask. The temptation of the trade is to become the voice — the cadence people come for, the pauses that sound like depth. I have heard preachers who could make a bus timetable sound like scripture, and I distrust it in them and in myself. The old words survive because nobody owns them. Mine will not, and I would rather they were plain.

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Which writer says that an audience’s patience depends on their being able to see that the performer is at ease?
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Which writer suggests that an audience responds to a structure before it has understood the content?
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Which writer expresses unease about the ethics of what they do well?
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Which writer regards a commonly drawn distinction between two forms as not worth discussing?
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Which writer says that the lines people remember from their work are never ones they wrote?
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Which writer describes deliberately saying something more than once for the benefit of listeners?
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Which writer believes that words with no author outlast words that have one?
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Which writer says that their work must withstand being heard inaccurately?
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Which writer claims that most people in their field work in the opposite order from them?
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Which writer says that the vocabulary available to them is limited by the person who will deliver it?

What this paper told you

The marks below are your best unaided attempt on each part — the one you did after clearing the support, not the one you did with it open. Parts 1–3 are one mark a question; in the real paper Part 4 is two marks a question and Parts 5–6 two marks each.

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This was the scaffolded mock, so a high score with the help open tells you little. Look at the gap between the two attempts on each part: where it is wide, the help was doing the work, and that is the part to revisit before Mock 2.